small stone 3- Wisp of a Wind

Sonja Chan

February 3

The school bus is late but I stand in wait to notice
that shifting among the tree leaves in a distance-
The agitation makes a slow progression toward me
and now I feel on my face his touch -
this gentle, playful, wisp of a wind.

Like · · · Sunday at 2:43am

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• Marcia Weaver and 13 others like this.
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  Cynthia Reed Very nice, Sonja. I liked the 'playful wisp of a wind' especially.

  Sunday at 4:04am · Like · 1
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  Helen Jane Merritt Lovely - the 'agitation'

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  Sonja Chan Glad you like it, Cynthia (and Mieke)..my thanks. Truly a heaven-sent respite from stormy winds this time of the year in the east coast!

  Sunday at 10:43am · Like
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  Sonja Chan Helen, yes, I think so too! Played with 'movement' and 'displacement' alongside with it but yes, I like your word 'lovely' - thanks!

  Sunday at 10:50am · Like
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  Sonja Chan Much appreciate your joining me here as well: Monica, Daman, Judi, Suzanne, Maureen, Nancy, Rosemary, Nicki.....

  Sunday at 10:55am · Like